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Future Queen in Zion

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Lies



your words shaped my life
and who I am

repeated
over and over until I believed
you

I began to hate
him

repeated
over and over until I knew
it would never change

I began to see
no way out

repeated
over and over until I wanted
to run

I began to move
away

repeated
over and over until I learned
the truth

I began to be
furious

repeated
over and over until I stopped
listening.



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Future Queen in Zion

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Sorry. I must have left the chipper poetry in my other pants.

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I agree, :( Tonight I went to a fireside where the speaker spoke how his dad always said all these praiseworthy comments (ie you are the best/the greatest son, etc). And the speaker said as he grew older, he realized this wasn't the case, t hat he was just like everyone else. He had humility.

Today at church I heard a mom of a new baby telling a couple of us that her young daughter is such "an awesome big sister!".

While it is nice these people get to hear these wonderful compliments, and I know it is important to be happy for others and the fact they get such good support and encouragement, it did make me think how it might be if I had grown up hearing more praise instead of just criticism (basically revolving around having a messy room and not being good in math). (not that it matters, but the compliments I got were rare and very sporadic)

I do like your poem though!

Also just a suggestion but maybe should this thread be renamed the Poetry thread to further differentiate from "crafts"? I know Poetry is an art form.

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Hot Air Balloon

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nita: you seem to be saying that praise is not all that it's cracked up to be, but you wanted more?

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Keeper of the Holy Grail

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You lied to me, you dirty scum.
Now I'm gonna kick your bum.
After that, I'll feel much better.
And your bum'll be a whole lot redder.

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